Comments on: Benefit held for Sgt. Stephen Liczbinski http://morganazalot.wordpress.com/2008/06/25/benefit-held-for-sgt-stephen-liczbinski/ journalist | philadelphia, pa. Thu, 15 Oct 2009 04:03:40 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: Christopher Wink http://morganazalot.wordpress.com/2008/06/25/benefit-held-for-sgt-stephen-liczbinski/#comment-17 Christopher Wink Wed, 02 Jul 2008 20:15:18 +0000 http://morganazalot.wordpress.com/?p=57#comment-17 Glad to see you getting everything up on this site, though I have to get used to so many columns - small reading area. Good story, also happy you're getting great clips with other outlets, like the News Gleaner. But that lede! You have an offer killed in the line of duty, and thousands wanting to see him and you lede with a formal title! Drive me batty. I might do something like that, but I expect more of you. Thousands poured in... The murder of an officer... ...Or at least just the cop's name, not her title yet. ...But maybe not. Just some thoughts. Keep going, Morgan. Glad to see you getting everything up on this site, though I have to get used to so many columns – small reading area.

Good story, also happy you’re getting great clips with other outlets, like the News Gleaner.

But that lede! You have an offer killed in the line of duty, and thousands wanting to see him and you lede with a formal title! Drive me batty.

I might do something like that, but I expect more of you.

Thousands poured in…
The murder of an officer…
…Or at least just the cop’s name, not her title yet. …But maybe not. Just some thoughts. Keep going, Morgan.

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